You Shall Know Our Velocity

I got this book when McSweeney’s had their big sale last year. I never read A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius, and I never read this one even after I bought it. It happened that when I was unpacking my books, I was a week into a misguided mission to read Roland Barthes’ Image, Music, Text. I was thankful to give up on that, but while this book was easier to read, it wasn’t too enjoyable.

The story concerns two friends who start a week-long trip around the world to give away a bunch of money. Apparently this trip was motivated by the narrator Will’s overwhelming grief after their friend Jack died suddenly in a car accident, so it should be kind of emotional and touching. Unfortunately the two dudes are just assholes. And then there are the bad attempts at multilinear storytelling that fall hollowly flat. It’s strange because I think of Eggers as a pretty good writer from various non-book writings of his that I’ve read, but this story seems structurally flawed.

After finishing the book today, I started reading some reviews and commentary about it and find out that a later edition included a supplemental section from Will’s friend Hand that discounts many of the bigger parts of the story (including saying that Will made Jack up to deal with his mother’s death) and was retitled Sacrament. I downloaded just the extra Sacrament part on the McSweeney’s site but only managed to skim through it before getting annoyed at his claims of Will’s all-out fabrication of pieces of the story.

I don’t know if it’s just that I’ve read some books that I really loved lately, but this was so surprisingly disappointing. For some reason I just didn’t buy the unreliability of the narrator aspect of Hand’s addition to the story. Why should I believe any of it then?

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joseph 01 Aug 2008 · 09:17

i read this book a few years ago and also found it tremendously disappointing. i would recommend heartbreaking work, with some reservations. it is not a perfect book, but the story is interesting and well written for the most part. the problem is dave eggers himself, he is just not a likable guy and the comes through in his writing. morgan and i have seen him twice at literary events in seattle and both time he came off slightly irksome.
i have heard great things about the memoir he wrote about the sudanese refugee, maybe someday i’ll pick it up.